User talk:Benrohr/sandbox

Nice job, Ben!
 * Make sure you're using the right header levels - for example the "symptoms" section should be a level 1 header (big text with the long line). Phosphorous Deficiency won't be a header since it's the article title
 * Word count is light -- you are at 631 not counting your citations (which don't count). See my comment at the bottom -- add more plain-language explanations of the highly technical concepts to bring up that word count.
 * Now that you have the inline citations / footnotes, you can take out the paranthetical citations - they're redundant
 * Your citations are a thing of beauty! Only one tiny suggestion - try to italicize the journal titles if you can (ie. Agronomy journal). Put two apostrophes before and after in the Source editor (or click the I in the visual editor).
 * Try including a little more big-picture explanations - how would you explain some of this stuff to your granny (who is not a plant scientist)? Try putting some of the more complicated stuff into plain language (ex. What does colorimetrically mean in 6-10 words?)

Keep up the good work! Kairyth (talk) 23:23, 5 April 2016 (UTC)