User talk:Benwhitingmusic/sandbox

This is good, Ben! A few notes: Ijmusic (talk) 23:17, 5 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Fix the link to Down Beat: they have an article
 * You will need a bibliography
 * Reconsider gushing adjectives like "prestigious" and "incredible"
 * Check your punctuation, especially the semi-colon that precedes the list of collaborators (should be a colon)