User talk:Bequebmemory/sandbox

I have a draft that is almost six months old. I'm not a dedicated wiki editor. I want to resolve my edit before it is permanently deleted, but clearly understand I do not have the experience or knowledge to do this well. I would love for someone to help although I realize you must get such requests continually, so I apologize. Right now it sounds like the article reads like an advertisement, and I'm trying to find the neutral position to state the facts to demonstrate notability without listing too much (articles about him in the New York Time, USA Today, etc). I would be so grateful for any useful advice! Also, I have the artist's contact info (found on his website) but am reluctant to contact him directly about this, so I'd also appreciate advice on that, as well. Is that a bad idea? I was thinking he could provide info I haven't been able to verify...