User talk:Berline70

tone
Updating the information about Elio Motors is appreciated, but please try to keep the text objective and factual in tone. Predicting that the company will create a "boom" in employment in Caddo Parish, talking about "enhancing its All-American image", and such promotional language is inappropriate for a neutral encyclopedia article. Both supporters and critics of the company should be able to agree that the text is fair and factual. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 14:58, 16 January 2014 (UTC)


 * What is your relationship to Elio Motors? If you are editing Wikipedia on their behalf, you are required to acknowledge that fact.  Please see Conflict of interest for a better understanding of the problems this poses. -Jason A. Quest (talk) 22:30, 17 January 2014 (UTC)