User talk:Bernicewlin/sandbox

TA Comments:

In-text citations: yes

Professional tone: yes

Paraphrasing real science: yes

Grammar and spelling: overall good, but update formatting to reflect wikipedia

Links to other wiki articles: none

Score: 17/20

Peer Review:

This is a good draft. You did well relating Jorgensen's contributions to the field of chemistry. Explaining how his computational chemistry helped other fields, like organic chemistry is very informative. It's great to help understand how these fields are tied together through Jorgensen's work. Also, I like how you explained what else his work contributed to and how it is still being used today. Overall, I think it's a good draft explaining how he has effected the fields of chemistry. I suggest that you write more about how his work contributed to the field of quantum mechanics and add more about the research performed at his lab. I also suggest that you add wiki links to other pages, including Melinta Therapeutics, condensed-phase systems, and maybe more throughout the article.

REYNOSO, VANESSA Peer Review Score: 20/20