User talk:Berzzerkerz/sandbox

This rational clearly articulates how the topic is related to SDG6 and what specific components need improving. Debbie Goss (talk) 19:34, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

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Share the love I liked how this article specifically explained how sewage sludge is produced in the lead, but the terms used in this article were difficult and it made me take a while to imagine the process. I would suggest using more words and terms which the readers can understand without jumping to the other Wikipedia articles about those.

A lead section The lead precisely explains how sewage sludge is produced which is very helpful, but I don't see anything reflect the information written after the lead section. I would recommend to briefly mention about the information this article covers in the lead to give the readers general idea of the topic.

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I found some information from self-publish authors and personal blogs. I would recommend using more academic resources such as textbooks and journal articles. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sasamaro (talk • contribs) 03:54, 19 November 2019 (UTC)

This article appears to be very comprehensive and informative. Looking through the article, I noticed a few sections that could use more detail. In particular, classes of sewage sludge (US) and disposal, especially landfill and ocean dumping, are very short and not very explanatory for someone with no knowledge of the topic. I think expanding on those sections is a good task for your group. Aakinlana (talk) 07:05, 19 November 2019 (UTC)