User talk:Bes018

Welcome!
Hello, Bes018, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Ways to improve Donika Kelly
Hi, I'm Rosguill. Bes018, thanks for creating Donika Kelly!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. The Education section can be condensed down to a paragraph or two, it doesn't need subheaders for every stage in Kelly's education. Additionally, both the list of publications and awards are rather long and include several entries of dubious notability or importance. Consider shortening them to only include the most important entries. Finally, the article is in desperate need more footnotes, and citations to independent sources; Wikipedia's policies are particularly strict when it comes to biographies of living people, and information without clear citation should not be included in the article.

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signed,Rosguill talk 06:44, 24 October 2018 (UTC)