User talk:Bethpallen/sandbox

Great outline! I recommend doing a double check on grammar and look out for run-on sentences. Also check your in-text citations and which source they're coming from. All citations from the same source should have the same number in the text, and different numbers should only appear when you switch sources. Good list of sources and article neutrality! Also good use of in-text citations to back up material presented. Justinedowns (talk) 02:30, 17 March 2018 (UTC) Justinedowns @Justinedowns Thanks for the feedback!!Bethpallen (talk) 17:57, 21 March 2018 (UTC)