User talk:Bettina Albers

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Krzysztof Wilmanski, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. Note that because you are a logged-in user, you can create articles yourself, and don't have to post a request. However, you are more than welcome to continue submitting work to Articles for Creation. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! 14:10, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
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Congratulations on Krzysztof Wilmanski
This is a nice article on a notable scientist. But, please review the article for a few problems. The English phrasing is clumsy or unclear in a few places, specifically I do not understand what "took the matura" or "completed his habilitation" mean, are these foreign-language terms? They need to have better wording for English Wikipedia. Also I saw there was a close paraphrasing problem. Not quite enough to cause me to reject the whole submission, but the paragraph needs to be rewritten in your own words. Please address these items. Again, congrats and thank you for your contribution! 14:34, 29 June 2012 (UTC)