User talk:Bgadis/sandbox

Peer Review (Alexis Arnett)
The beginning of the article explains the main topic being Raymond Poe well by stating who he is and what he does. The ideas expressed in the article was relevant with the topic. For example, mentioning the Illinois State Fair and explaining Poe attending the fair related to agriculture because the fair had farming involved. The article could use more information of Raymond Poe's early life and how that could have related to agriculture. To further improve the article, there should be more sections talking about Raymond Poe's life chronologically and in more detail. The article does remain rather neutral and does not stray away from the main topic. The article should include more than three sources and those sources should also include journals.