User talk:Bgjd1979

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been re-reviewed. However, there are still some questions preventing its immediate acceptance. My comments are not the same as the previous reviewer, who appears not to have carefully read the submission. Rather:


 * Notability is very clear, but I am a little concerned that the article may have been paraphrased from the sources listed, especially because the format is not quite the way we usually use subheadings, and some of the content is the statement of opinion or judgement. (Such statement should be avoided and if used, need to be specifically sourced at the sentence level and if possible quoted--an example of such opinion is  "The Colonel apparently mistook...."  As they are print sources, they will be difficult to check. Could you please verify that you have avoided not only copyvio, but  Close paraphrase If any is present, rewrite that part from scratch, changing not just the words, but the arrangement into sentences and the sequence of ideas.   Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.

Please continue working on the submission; you can find it at Wikipedia&.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Evangelina Cosio y Cisneros (September 16)
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia!  T K K ! bark with me if you're my dog!  03:05, 16 September 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Evangelina Cosio y Cisneros (October 14)
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.
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Your submission at AfC Evangelina Cosio y Cisneros was accepted
 Evangelina Cosio y Cisneros, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Cerebellum (talk) 14:28, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
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