User talk:Bgpawikedit

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I have reverted your changes to the article. Although it appears you had put a lot of time into this, it had a number of issues and did not improve from the ealier version. Firstly and foremost, Wikipedia is an encyclopaedia and articles must be neutral and written in an encyclopaedic style. I strongly suggest that you read some of the above mentioned pages before making further contributions. Its also wise with mature articles like this to make small changes incrementally to allow other editors to comment. Complete rewrites should generally be discussed on the article talk page first. –Moondyne 02:34, 24 July 2009 (UTC)