User talk:Bgr28/Mirza Ibrahimov

Overall, I'd say that this article is a heavy improvement on the original one, given that the original one just contained random tidbits from his life and a small paragraph on his contributions. The organization of your draft is great compared to the original one, as well as the content. It adds a lot more detail that the original article was really lacking. The only thing I would suggest improvement on would be adding sections about his early and later life, and adding links to the sources in your bibliography if you can.