User talk:Bgrandone80

Your submission at Articles for creation: La DoubleJ (January 9)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

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Theroadislong (talk) 15:56, 9 January 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:La DoubleJ has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:La DoubleJ. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 17:05, 9 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: La DoubleJ (January 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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EROS message 10:28, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Draft:La DoubleJ
In response to your enquiry, Wikipedia require articles to have a broad range of references which gives wide coverage to the subject. You inserted only one source which is The Business of Fashion and it was used for six times in a row. Instead, you should source for different and diverse references. Tip: mainstream publication, well-known newspapers and books. Do avoid user generated content like Instagram, LinkedIn, Facebook, Youtube, other forms of Wikipedia and also try to stay away from what we call as primary sources eg. homepages and websites which are related and closely affiliated with the subject. EROS message 11:31, 15 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: La DoubleJ (May 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Legacypac was:

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Legacypac (talk) 10:00, 22 May 2018 (UTC)