User talk:Bgwiki15

hello, Here is my link to sandbox: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Yw59/sandbox

I've take a look on your theory page, which is pretty well-developed. However, I think the way you classify the subjects of your theory is good and you give a clear definition to it, which is great as well.

The suggestion that I would like to mention is that I think maybe you can add some current studies regarding to how Symbolic Interactionism applies to the new media domain.

hello — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yw59 (talk • contribs) 17:14, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

Hey there, It looks as though you're on the right track with the definition of the theory as well as the citations. It would help to see the general structure they intend to use for the page in order to make suggestions. As of right now, the only comment I can offer is perhaps embedding the links to other sites within the text of the page as opposed to just placing the URL in the text.

Opheliajw (talk) 16:11, 17 October 2011 (UTC)

Feedback Request
Ben,

I'm not in a position to comment on the substance of your additions, since this is not my field, but I've looked over the page, and looked through the revisions; you've expanded the original article by almost 30%, and the additions you've made all seem well sourced.

One suggestion would be to link it further to other pages in Wikipedia; for instance there are pages (albeit some of them are stubs) for things like The Managed heart, Znaniecki or Symbolic Interaction that could all be linked in order to provide more context and easier access.

AlbinoFlea (talk) 23:35, 6 December 2011 (UTC)