User talk:Bh597/Hassanamisco Nipmuc

Peer Review: I have done your peer review and thoroughly enjoyed reading your article. You have an amazing linear style. Best of luck completing the article and I hope that you have a great rest of the day.

Peer review 2
There's a lot of interesting material here, very effectively presented. Thanks for your work.--Carwil (talk) 04:38, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
 * "recognized as a sovereign nation by the state of Massachusetts" — Look up carefully the form of recognition that Massachusetts offer
 * The opening two paragraphs feel a little chaotic. What is it that we most need to know first about the Hassanamisco Nipmuc? It seems like early Christianization, intermarriage with Black freeman in the 19th century, and contemporary state, but not federal recogantion all belong in the lead.
 * How does their history relate to other Christianized Indians of the colonial period? What happened to them between 1674 and 1800?
 * Do you have basic demographic information on their population size and location?

Peer Review 3
Hello! I have just completed my peer review for your current article. Great work and let me know if you have any questions about the feedback I left.