User talk:Bietgidau123/sandbox

(Jiazhen Lu (talk) 01:00, 3 December 2020 (UTC)) The editor added three new titles to the original article, Global Warming, Greenhouse affect lead to climate change and Reduce greenhouse effect, which are all related to environmental protection. I think a better sorting method is to put the reduce greenhouse area right behind the greenhouse affect, which will make the article more organized. Then，under the References page I noticed that only the references in the original text have been added, make sure to add three references you had found that required by instructor.

Peer evaluation
You discussed the topic clearly while making sure the information added was relevant to the topic. Great job! The information is presented neutrally with no perceived bias. As far as your sources they are all valid and up to date but I believe that you should cite your sources at the end of each sentence instead of all at the beginning. I am not sure which website you retrieved each piece of information from in order to validate the claims made. Your contributions are well written and easy to read with no grammatical or spelling errors. Thats great! I recommend you to reorganize your sources so that they align with the claims you formulated. Here is an example: claim formulated by user [1] --Jaydahol (talk) 23:40, 4 December 2020 (UTC)