User talk:Big.macncheese/sandbox

While I don't see your contributions to the article yet, I see the questions you've raised regarding the topic. You have good questions, and you've done a nice job pointing out what the previous articles are missing. I think if you use those questions to create an informative, non biased article, you will do well.

Draft feedback
Hi, Conner!

This draft is a fine starting point, and an excellent piece to add to the article. As you continue working on this, looking at the history of the school could be a natural section to add--when was it founded, is there a history of the physical property, the structure and offerings, the student body size and makeup, any significant construction projects, changes in funding, etc. (it's likely you won't find information on all of these fronts, but even one or two could still be meaningful additions). You've done a great job so far attaching sources where needed in your draft material. My biggest suggestion for sources is to try to branch out from the school website (which you can of course also continue drawing from...having more sources than just the one designed to draw students/families to the school would be a good move for the article's credibility, though). You might try looking at newspaper articles--what kinds of events come up about this school in news local to it?

I look forward to seeing what else you add to this! Nicoleccc (talk) 01:44, 29 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review #1
I feel like you did a good job building an outline first before putting down all of the information. Research has the potential to be overwhelming and I think you have a really nice starting place once you begin to build the article more. Now all you have to do is find non biased sources and transfer the information to this Wiki page and you're chilling.