User talk:BigDogS23/Yellowtail snapper

So far the changes committed really benefit the page. The new section formatting is intuitive and informative. However, I wonder if all the sections are necessary. For example, the range of the fish would most likely be communicated in 1, maybe 2 sentences, so the Range section may not be warranted. Perhaps sections like Range and Predators could be combined into a more general Ecology section that describes how they fit into their environment. With that being said, if this granularity is common to other fish pages on Wikipedia then ignore these comments. I think it is better to have the information more divided rather than less.

Furthermore, some of the pictures/graphics from the original page could be added to this new format.

I agree that the fishing section could be combined with conservation/management.

The fishing section most likely needs a citation.

Other than filling out the already delineated sections, this new draft of the page appears more useful and informative. Nice job! Tghardy (talk) 01:36, 1 April 2021 (UTC)