User talk:BigJohn24/sandbox

Tho4.buffalo (talk) 15:37, 7 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi there, I think you have done a great job of telling readers what is the effects toward violence against women. However, I have a few questions. You have nine references, but while reading your essay, I have only seen two of them. For your first sentence introducing the essay, you said "from this article", can you explain to me what is this article is? So far you did a great job.