User talk:Big ol' Brain/new sandbox

I am peer reviewing Claire’s wikipedia edits for Mati Diop. In looking at the article as a whole, I felt the sections were laid out clearly in an easy to follow fashion. I think the article is strong in remaining neutral, as well as using reliable sources. In terms of neutrality, the information is stated very factually and the phrases and word choice are impartial. I do not hear “your voice” which leaves your perspective unrecognized. In regard to the sources, they are all from scholarly reliable outlets, such as the LA Times, Variety and studies from Harvard. I was further impressed by the lead, as it caught my attention and made me want to learn more about this female director. Perhaps the biggest change I would suggest is adding more to the directing section. While the article does a good job chronologically describing her projects and the festivals they were admitted to, I was left wanting to know more about her style or themes for her works. Maybe adding a quote of her speaking about her role or motivations as a director could also add to this section. Further, although I am sure it is difficult to find, more information on her acting side would be a great addition to understanding her many creative sides. Nice work overall!