User talk:BigbrownPaddlaa/BigbrownPaddlaaDraft

Uses APA citation properly. Has the proper Wikipedia coding (Section Heading, etc.). The tone is informative a neutral. The websites used are all non-academical pages it would have been better to see something sited that wasn't a website which is being paid for by ads, but this should not affect the information which was given because they are not trying to sell shipyards. A few of these sites were also industry news type sites which are likely to be very reliable. On a side note you might want to go in and just fix grammatical errors. you write " But in able to have..." a few times this should be changed to "but to be able to have..." or "in order to have..." --Tbrown224 (talk) 18:40, 6 April 2012 (UTC)