User talk:BillShaine

Breitling SA
Hi Bill. Just dropping by to let you know that I reverted your rewrite of the "Navitimer" section of this article. I realise the article isn't in a great state as it is, but unfortunately your edits did not help in this matter. I understand you're quite the expert on this subject but you still need to comply with the way this encyclopedia is written...
 * Phrases such as "the excellent", "Riding on the success of" or "highly desired" constitute as puffery and should be avoided (certainly without including a reference stating as such, see the following).
 * External links should not be provided in-text (Wikipedia aims to provide the reader with the complete information on a topic, not simply a collection of links to elsewhere!) and should certainly not be prefixed by some recommendation text!
 * Anything you add to an article should include a reference to a reliable source, especially for a topic you have prior knowledge on - adding un-referenced information will likely get even good edits reverted.

Please give me a shout if you've any questions on the above. If you wish to continue editing this article, I suggest you make those edits on the Talk page of the article and await conformation from an unaffiliated editor. Cheers,  Nik the  stunned  10:56, 21 January 2014 (UTC)