User talk:BillyandtheLoush

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Reference Errors on 6 December
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Monty Python
Thanks for the request for more detail following my edit summary. The section you wrote is overly detailed for a general encyclopedia: a more broad brush approach is needed. If you cover several counties in this way it will take over the article. The addition is not well written in that it has long rambling sentences and numbers in the text. Having no access to the source material I am also concerned about copyright issues, as I do not know how closely you have copied the original text. There is also a possible issue with synthesis, as I do not know whether the conclusions you draw are stated in the source text or whether you have inferred them from your own reading of it. There are also grammar errors, for example tendencys should be tendencies. Britmax (talk) 13:48, 8 December 2014 (UTC)