User talk:Bing123456/sandbox

Hi Bing, I think you have a really good start on this article. I like how you split up each of the sections because it seems to be a timeline of her political reign. However, you might want to edit the headings (style-wise) so they match how a "typical" wikipedia article is formatted. Also, make sure that you are adding in your sources and citing where the information came from (I assume you will do that, this is just a draft. I didn't have my sources in my draft either.)

Can you find information on Wu Zhao's life? It might be good to create a section before the "entering politics" one that is based on basic life facts: such as birth, death, where she was born, family, or anything else that would be important in describing who she is. I think that this could help the reader better understand who Wu Zhao is, if you can find the information.

Is there more information on why she was forced to resign from her position? Or information on the revolt from General Zhang Jian Zhi? It sounds interesting and it might be good to elaborate on that a little further in your last section titled "stepping down." It also might be helpful to try to add some more information about her claiming the throne, as that seems to be what defines the impact she has as an influential woman.

I know that this is a draft, so these are just some suggestions! I am looking forward to potentially reading your final article. It'll be great!