User talk:Binney27

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Peer Review Comments
I don't have time for a full review right now (will try and remember to give a more comprehensive one later), but I've got a few brief comments: That's all I have for now. -- Shudde talk 11:58, 6 July 2015 (UTC)  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 159.39.36.42 (talk)
 * Comments from Shudde
 * The lead is very brief and should be expanded. It needs to adequately summarise the article.
 * The bibliography seems to be a copy of Bibliography of Colin Wilson and doesn't seem to add all that much. It's also unreferenced
 * There is a large list of further reading and external links. I'm not sure what purpose these serve. If some can be used as references then I encourage that (with appropriate inline citations), but otherwise it may be worth cutting those lists. (see MOS:FOOTERS)