User talk:Bio345 misa/sandbox

Misa, Amazing page and really awesome layout. You seem to have everything in order and all the headings are well laid out. Tons of sources which is nice to see. Great use of history, politics, facts and ecology but maybe a little more on its ecological impacts? I can't find much else to comment on, really great job. Only getting a picture up on there would be useful, but I see you have a comment in there so hopefully someone will put one up when they see your page. Great page! Beng0202 (talk) 09:49, 21 March 2013 (UTC)

Hey Misa, Do you have any references for any info in the introduction? A general info page for the farm maybe? The history is really interesting, but rethink linking years to other Wikipedia sites. Knowing the dates of events and moves in interesting but the wiki page of “1999” isn’t going to improve my knowledge of the farm at all. Same goes for “m3”. The quotes are great, they make it clear that you drew info from sources and that it’s legitimate! Really great presentation of information. UBC Farm also offers a weekly vegetable box delivery service through sprouts where they bring you a bucket full of freshly grown vegetables called Sprouts Box (http://www.ubcsprouts.ca/initiatives/sprouts-box/), which would be really good to include as a service. Maybe an image of the farm would be useful? The page is very well formatted but a picture would make it more visually appealing. Overall great job, I learned a lot and this was really well done! Taracrothers (talk) 23:01, 21 March 2013 (UTC)