User talk:Bio561grp4s12/sandbox

I'm going to try to list some of the small things as I see them; not sure if this talk page is the best way to do it or not: 1) citations at the end of the sentence should be outside the period. I changed reference #1 and a few others to the correct format. Most of the others also need to be rearranged. 2) 1st paragraph: C. elegans should be italic and linked to it's wikipedia page. 3) first reference to "somite" should be linked to it's page. 4) I made a bunch of minor grammatical edits in paragraph 3. 5) "Central Neural System" should be "Central Nervous System." All links in red are false links. You should try to find the correct one. Biolprof (talk) 21:55, 6 May 2012 (UTC)