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Just some things I noticed:

1. The wording in some of the sections are kind of confusing and difficult to comprehend. This especially true in the section about Notch's role in the adult brain.n to make

2.In the section about neurite development, what numb does is not clear. "There are also studies showing that Numb deletion disrupts neuronal maturation in the developing cerebellum,[14] whereas deletion of Numb and Numb disrupts axonal arborization in sensory ganglia in vivo" are these both caused by numb deletions or is there a difference between the two deletions?

3. In the last section, does notch play a role through the endocrine system in development of the gut and bone or directly play a role in their development. If it does play a direct role, they should be moved to a new section or rename the section to make it clearer.

Bio561grp1s12 (talk) 17:41, 9 May 2012 (UTC) Brittany