User talk:Bio561grp5s12/sandbox

Great job! & I'm really excited to see it go live. I made a bunch of very small changes (mostly deleting extra spaces between end of sentence and ref numbers). A few other issues to be addressed:

1) Causes/Recent studies/2nd sentence: Should this read, "Homozygous negative Pzx2 mutation is lethal..." instead of "Heterozygous..."

Corrected this on May 7th at 1:55am!

2) Molecular genetic testing: First sentence is a fragment, not a whole sentence.

Corrected this on May 7th at 1:55am!

3) Your references to journals and books need to be more complete, not just the link. Follow the format of Reference 2 that was already in the stub. Include the doi and the PMID (Pubmed ID#).

Corrected this on May 7th at 1:56am!

Your link to the Schimmenti paper includes the author's prepublication version, but you should include the full reference to the published version. I'm not sure if the pdf is copyrighted in which case Wikipedia will disallow it, but the pubmed/abstract link will remain.

Corrected this on May 7th at 2:09am!

Also, how reliable is the "RightDiagnosis.com website (ref 11)? I've never heard of it. Is there a better source?

Corrected this on May 7th at 2:00am!

4) You should try to include more links to other wikipedia pages. I added a couple. The most obvious one that was still missing was ESRD (which defaults to a page on chronic kidney disease), but I think there should be others.

Corrected!

Biolprof (talk) 04:56, 7 May 2012 (UTC)