User talk:Bio Neuro Student/Trumpeter swan

Hello,

You did a great job with your article. A few things I would change/add are: in your opening under courtship/mate choice I would include a sentence that explains what courtship/mate choice is. Then explain how this occurs in trumpeter swans before you add in the part about nest constructing in late April. While that does sound good the way you have it written it almost feels more like an awesome intro to a paper than the opening of a Wikipedia article. You also have written in that paragraph "and what the name of this animal originates" I would reword that to say "and where the common name of this animal originates". The "what" to me does not seem to fit. and since this is a scientific page I would make reference to the fact that this is not the scientific name of the species but rather the common name. When you say "This type of call resembles a horn because the frequency can vary greatly." I would switch the order of the last two words. I love that you included a section about parental roles before explaining what each sex does.

You wrote a very interesting article. You seem to know your topic very well. Great job