User talk:Bishoptom

Ways to improve Mayank prakash
Hi, I'm JamesG5. Bishoptom, thanks for creating Mayank prakash!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Single source appears to be a PR notice from Mayank's company. Needs more sources and information to establish notability. Also it appears the Max Hopper article was copied as a template, but information & links about Hopper were not removed, this should be done immediately.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. JamesG5 (talk) 08:17, 20 March 2016 (UTC)

Ways to improve Mayank Prakash
Hi, I'm JamesG5. Bishoptom, thanks for creating Mayank Prakash!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. Please see notes on talk page.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. JamesG5 (talk) 17:44, 20 March 2016 (UTC)
 * I added some specific notes on the Talk page about the issues that need to be addressed, it's a great start, just needs some cleanup. JamesG5 (talk) 17:52, 20 March 2016 (UTC)

Ways to improve Mayank Prakash
Hi, I'm JamesG5. Bishoptom, thanks for creating Mayank Prakash!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. As noted on talk page, the DWP section is excessively long & detailed, with information that belongs in its articles, not here. Peacock phrasing like "Passionate about the cause" still abounds. Article needs pruning and cleanup for NPOV.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse. JamesG5 (talk) 20:50, 21 March 2016 (UTC)