User talk:Bizui888/New sandbox

General info Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Bizui888/New sandbox Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Bizui888/New sandbox Lead Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes, he wrote few days ago before class. Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes, there is a brief summary of major section. Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No, the lead is brief and clear Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Yes, it’s very concise. Lead evaluation Content Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes, it’s relavant Is the content added up-to-date? Yes, it’s updated. Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No, this content is well connected. Content evaluation Tone and Balance Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral? Yes, it’s all descriptive content. Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No, it’s objective Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No, there are no viewpoints that are over represented or under represented. Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No, these is no position yet. Tone and balance evaluation Sources and References Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? No, some article in source don’t have author name Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes, the content is related with the topic. Are the sources current? It’s long time ago. There is one source in 2002. Check a few links. Do they work? Yes, they all work. Sources and references evaluation Organization Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes, it’s very concise, clear and easy to read. Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? I don’t find any grammatical errors. Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? This content is no completed, but well-organized. Organization evaluation Images and Media Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Yes, i have clear understanding of China Internet cafe. Are images well-captioned? There is no image yet. Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? There is no image yet. Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? There is no image yet. Images and media evaluation For New Articles Only If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? Yes, there are several reliable sources. How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? Yes, the sources are connected with the topic Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Yes, the structure is similar with other articles. Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? No, it doesn’t link with other ariticles. New Article Evaluation Overall impressions Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes, it’s a small part. It can be improved by completion What are the strengths of the content added? It’s very powerful based on my experience in mainland. How can the content added be improved? There is lots of contents that can be added. Overall evaluation i think you do a very good job of first draft of your wiki project. I am interested in your topic. The Internet cafe is serious problem for China.