User talk:Bizzers03/Glycine receptor/Kyguy22 Peer Review

I enjoy what you have included in your draft of adding on to the Glycine article. It simple and every to comprehend which makes it much easier on the reader. I am really impressed with how you included Ohm’s Law into the article. I also believe that differentiating between adults and embryos is important and fascinating. I really enjoyed the new information.

I do not know if you have any plans with the lead section. However, being a reader. I found the third paragraph in the lead section to be a bit hard to comprehend and confusing. I had to read that paragraph a couple of times and I am not sure if I still understand it well. I would maybe look into simplifying it, or rewording it to make it more manageable for the readers. One other nick picky thing I would maybe include is giving a couple word description of NKCC1 is. Such as “NKCC1, a cotransporter protein”, or include the full name. For example, “Na-K-Cl cotransporter (NKCC)”. In some way if you can be a little bit more descriptive there, it will help the reader to follow along better.

I enjoyed what you are including. Thank you for the work you are doing and your future contribution to this article.

--Kyguy22 (talk) 02:56, 1 December 2021 (UTC)