User talk:Bkalua

Propitiation
Hello, the problem with your edits to the propitiation article is that you are clearly adding your own analyses to the subject. What you need to do if you think the text is incorrect is to find commentary from reliables sources (click to read up on that subject) and use that as the source for your edits. Right now everything you're doing reads like original research. You'r providing links to the Bible, which is fine, but then adding your analysis which is not. Also, I did not call your edits vandalism -- I believe you're trying to make the article better it's just that Wikipedia has fairly strict policy on how this is done. Thanks. SQGibbon (talk) 21:35, 28 January 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the help. I am new at this and have a real interest in this subject. thanks for the tips. I am not sure how the original info was put in here but it was unreliable to start with. It was put in with opinion to start with that had no good foundation so i will keep working at it. How do you change the opinion of the article without rewriting it? Anyway just some questions I have to figure out i guess. Thanks Bkalua (talk) 01:43, 29 January 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the late reply. I agree that the article as it stands now needs help as it doesn't do a good job of citing references.  What it does have going for it is a neutral tone which is something else your edits were lacking -- you appeared to have a strong opinion about the subject as opposed to just wanting to make a good general article about it.  Once you come across some secondary sources that contradict what's in the article then changing it is going to be tricky.  Soliciting help on the talk page or from the Christianity project would probably be a good next step.  Anyway, good luck! SQGibbon (talk) 07:22, 2 February 2011 (UTC)