User talk:Bkim227/sandbox

Bi

This sounds like a great topic, is it already a stub?. I'm surprised that this topic isn't already nailed down. Find a couple of recent reviews to get you started. TomHaffie (talk) 01:18, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

Bi

OK, a good start. You should add links to other WP pages as appropriate. Try to tighten up the writing a bit. Maybe have a colleague not familiar with the topic read it over for clarity and english usage.

Grade 2/2 TomHaffie (talk) 00:40, 11 November 2014 (UTC)