User talk:Bladeoftruth007

Your submission at Articles for creation: This our paradise (June 28)
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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 09:21, 28 June 2024 (UTC)


 * hi SS, thank you for the detailed feedback. i will definitely change the tone to make it more neutral. i had a question about the reliable sources though. all sources references i have used are highly reputed newspapers, magazines or publishers. i think they are quite reliable and neutral when it comes to sources? please clarify this if i haven't understood it correctly. Bladeoftruth007 (talk) 17:10, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * i just read the WP:NBOOK page. i think i need to add at least one more review done by an external source, before it becomes worthy of publishing + the neutral tone obvs Bladeoftruth007 (talk) 17:14, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * You are right. More reviews by external reliable sources and rewriting the draft to a neutral point of view, will easily get it published to mainspace. Cheers! Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 17:22, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Will resubmit in a few days/weeks. Bladeoftruth007 (talk) 17:24, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Maybe I can help you with rewriting after you have provided source. Don't forget to message me on my talk page, and I will be open to help. Thanks. Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 17:25, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Absolutely, that will be very helpful indeed! Will message you. Bladeoftruth007 (talk) 17:30, 28 June 2024 (UTC)