User talk:Blakenyguen/sandbox

Adding Sources
Adding sources to History of Baku

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_Baku

Mckay, John P. "Title: Baku Oil and Transcaucasian Pipelines, 1883-1891: A Study in Tsarist Economic Policy." JSTOR. Association for Slavic, East European, and Eurasian Studies, n.d. Web. . Gokay, Bulent. "The Battle for Baku (May‐September 1918): A Peculiar Episode in the History of the Caucasus." Taylor & Francis Online. Frank Cass, London, n.d. Web. .

Lattu, Kristan R. History Of Rocketry And Astronautics : Proceedings Of The Seventh And Eighth History Symposia Of The International Academy Of Astronautics : Baku, U.S.S.R., 1973 ; Amsterdam, The Netherlands, 1974. n.p.: San Diego, Calif. : Published for the American Astronautical Society by Univelt, Inc. 1989., 1989. Louisiana State University. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.

Henry, James Dodds. Baku, An Eventful History. n.p.: New York : Arno Press, 1977., 1977. Louisiana State University. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.
 * The sources look good, but you should post them in your sandbox, not the talk page. Josef Horáček (talk) 15:39, 26 October 2015 (UTC)
 * You added the sources wrong. The sources should be linked to citations in the text. I reverted your edit. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:10, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

Re-editing copy edits
Deleted comma after resolution, placed semi-colon after expensive on 3D-printing — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blakenyguen (talk • contribs) 18:07, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

The Lead
Not a bad lead. You should remove all capitalization except in the name of the country. Also delete "worlds" - national parks are called "national" for a reason. Once you're done with these edits, you can post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:25, 1 November 2015 (UTC)