User talk:Blargnaflargif/sandbox

Feedback on 2nd draft

 * All information needs inline citations to source
 * Citations missing lots of information
 * Missing 8 internal links — Preceding unsigned comment added by Michelev (talk • contribs) 19:56, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Proofread for missing commas, spelling/typos
 * Remove (new) notes
 * Don't cite Wikipedia material in References; instead, make internal links to relevant articles and images.

Michelev (talk) 19:55, 16 April 2014 (UTC)