User talk:Blasianmanda/Flipp Dinero

Classmate feedback
Hi Blasianmanda, here is the link to the peer review I just completed for your article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Blasianmanda/Flipp_Dinero/Sihern_Han_Peer_Review Cheers, Sihern Han (talk) 10:03, 1 February 2020 (UTC)

Hi here is the link to my peer review https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Blasianmanda/Flipp_Dinero/Kelleyschiedler_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review Kelleyschiedler (talk) 00:47, 5 February 2020 (UTC)

Feedback on your article
The new lede and the new early life section look pretty good. A close proofreading and copyediting would be good but the new references and such all seem to improve the article. You've added tons of new references and that looks great.

The career section looks like it's still a work-in-progress so that's obviously not ready to go but you seem to be off to a good start.

Clean up the stuff you have and feel free to work on more. When you're ready, you should start moving things over.

One final thing: You should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from. Many won't apply but some might. I've gone through and made a few edits to your articles to clean things up—mostly small stylistic things but there are definitely more. Look at the history to see what I've done before so you get a sense.

In any case, do a pass or two to address things I've mentioned and any of the things on the list on our website that apply and that you think will be helpful and/or improve the article. Then go ahead and make the done material live. Good work! — m a k o ๛  04:06, 14 February 2020 (UTC)