User talk:Blawindy

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Peer Review 1
Lead Section: I think the importance of the topic is great, you made it clear what your topic encompasses and included links to these pages to further help research and understanding for readers.

I think you could include some more information on what the topic entails and where you can find it in educational settings.

Structure: The page is strutted well and easy to navigate. You may want to include another image in the beginning of the page or maybe enlarge the image that you currently have on the page. It makes it more eye catching and more interesting to read.

Balance: I don't think theres anything off topic, but maybe you could expand further on the information. I think the page is a little short, but it can be difficult to expand this based off of the limited information that may be available for research.

Neutral: The tone is neutral and I didn't catch any implications of bias.

Reliable Sources: Your sources were all reliable, perhaps you could include a few more citations? It doesn't hurt to overly research. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lpastorella (talk • contribs) 17:34, 19 April 2018 (UTC)