User talk:Blcummings/Idaho Green Party

Lead Section: Your sandbox only has one paragraph right now, but I think some of the information you do have can be turned into a lead section.

Articles Content: There can be more information I think and the content that you do have can be rearranged differently.

Articles Tone & Balance: Reading the article, it was a little harder to follow since it seemed to jump from place to place.

Articles References: The references were all correct and the links worked.

Articles Organization: The article can be organized a little bit better and different sections added.

I would maybe start off with explaining what the Idaho Green Party is and then go into the details about it. I would also maybe reword a few things to keep from overusing the word “they”. To avoid this, I feel like you could combine some sentences instead of having two different sentences about the same thing. I also think that the last sentence is a repeat of the first and is not needed. There are also a few spelling errors, such as, “The Idaho Green Party is currently petitioning to become and (an?) active party again. The total valid signature(s?) required are 13,806.”.