User talk:Blessing Ekanem/sandbox

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I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.

You've done a nice job with this article. I just have a couple of thoughts you may want to consider:
 * You've identified great sources in your "annotations" section, so it would be great to see the sources in addition to Ridley added in citations. Using a Wikipedia article is a circular citation which is a tertiary source- as I've tagged in the article. It is better to find reliable secondary sources - like those in your annotations list. Another option is to go to the article and find what source was used for the information that you're citing - if it's a good source, you can use that source.
 * For multiple instances of the same source, like Ridley you can made one master reference, like and for subsequent used use the following tag . Each source should have it's own ref name.
 * Titles of newspapers, books, works should be in italics - I changed one instance of Reading Mercury in the introduction as an example.
 * Regarding a "Curable Patient" - do you mean "curable patient"? or an "incurable patient"? Why does it need to be in quotes? It doesn't need to be capitalized.
 * You may want to look at Janise Yntema for a sense of encyclopedic tone and grammar. You often do a good job, but it might helpful to fine-tune some sentences, like "Through marriage is how she got her last name Le Noir."

I'll be watching this page and your sandbox page for any updates. You can also "ping" me (just type "" as you see it) to your message on this page or leave a message on my talk page. Happy editing!-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 20:42, 4 November 2014 (UTC)