User talk:Blfaubion/sandbox

Hello Blfaubion! This is Knowl8dge. I look forward to working with you on Wikipedia! Knowl8dge (talk) 16:42, 23 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Hello Blfaubion, this is NoahMcGoff. I am excited to be working with you this semester! NoahMcGoff (talk) 22:10, 23 February 2021 (UTC)

Instructor Feedback: Article Evaluation

 * If there are broken links, how were you able to check that the sources support what the article states? You seem to clarify later but just confirm please
 * Good observation re: the sources. This will be a significant location for article improvement for all of us
 * One of the critical aspects of Wikipedia is that the language in an article should be accessible. You have a great deal of biology background and are gaining more by the day. Is the language used right now accessible to a general audience? Like an 8th grader?
 * Your suggestion to submit a notice of bad/ broken links to the talk page is good. What would make it better is to find links that would work here so that you can have a productive discussion.
 * Looks like you have unearthed a LOT of potential work to be done on this article. Great work.Osquaesitor (talk) 16:13, 1 March 2021 (UTC)