User talk:Blfridma/sandbox

Aevuich (talk) 15:26, 30 November 2018 (UTC) Really good so far, just be sure to add proper citations and references in text. In the second sentence of the third paragraph, "Serengeti" should be capitalized.

Corrinnc (talk) 15:35, 30 November 2018 (UTC) Awesome so far. You did a really nice job of staying factual and following wiki guidelines. Obviously as others already pointed out, be sure to add proper citations and references. Otherwise it looks great!

Tho4.buffalo (talk) 15:40, 7 December 2018 (UTC)

Hi there I found your eassy does a great job of explaining Tanzania. Good references and clear summary.

Chauhiulaam (talk) 04:44, 8 December 2018 (UTC)The citations and references is very detailed. The information is very clear and the way to present is consistent.

Hyperlinks and citations
While the article is quite well thought out and informative, there are no hyperlinks that let readers go to other pages if they want to learn more about some of the ideas and subjects that are briefly mentioned but not the focus of your specific article. If you could add hyperlinks to the work it would be most beneficial.

Dawsonator101 (talk) 15:35, 30 November 2018 (UTC)Dawson

Stacyjljoseph (talk) 15:37, 30 November 2018 (UTC) I would add a map at the beginning to help visualize the geography discussed in the first paragraph and just add citations throughout.

Lot of details great!!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by AshrabiS (talk • contribs) 01:18, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

This is one of the best articles, very informative and detailed. All your points are clear, and you did so without trying to convince the audience of your views. It would be best to add citations so readers can go to the links BigJohn24 (talk) 06:46, 7 December 2018 (UTC)