User talk:Blin1095/sandbox

Azurashi Peer Review
Hey,

I added some comments to your sandbox's 'Edit' page, you can check them out by clicking the [!] boxes. Overall, good work so far!

Azurashi (talk) 17:00, 25 March 2016 (UTC)

DerikWP Peer Review
Hi Blin1095,

I've added some comments and suggestions throughout the page in your sandbox. Let me know if you have any questions about them.

DerikWP (talk) 17:02, 25 March 2016 (UTC)

DerikWP Review x2
Howdy there Blin1095,

I like what you've done with the article so far. I've added several new comment throughout your page. Content-wise, the article seems to be faring quite well. I think the next major step you need to take to really up the quality of this article would be to read through it all and fix syntax, grammar and flow issues. I tried to point out some of the more major issues I saw, but certainly not all of them. Taking the time to do this would improve the article tremendously, in my opinion. Let me know if you have any questions or comments.

DerikWP (talk) 17:23, 2 April 2016 (UTC)