User talk:Blong31/sandbox

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Please convert bibliography to electronic citations. You have one electronic citation already, just convert the other two in the same way. Also note when the site was excavated. Finally, please describe the pottery. Profarch (talk) 16:04, 16 March 2018 (UTC)

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Good job Bryant, Did you find anymore information on the site? I think it would be great if you go into details about the excavation. Who discovered the site? I would also like if you included some site tags as well. See if you can link your page to other wiki pages using words in your summary such as " Rajasthan, Chalcolithic,Iron Age, and Medieval Periods. I also notice that you only had two sources. I think finding a third source may help give a little more information about the site. (Marccp 22 (talk) 21:39, 21 March 2018 (UTC))

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I think it would be helpful to define what you meant by the different societies and periods. Do you mean that this site was occupied and went through these periods? Do you know if it was continuously occupied? Basically, it would be great if you could find any information and explain further.

I think it would also be good to go into more detail regarding the modern day issues surrounding the site, as you briefly mentioned. Kitkatthy (talk) 03:55, 23 March 2018 (UTC)