User talk:BloomChef

Your submission at Articles for creation: TonyHD (June 8)
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-MPGuy2824 (talk) 07:44, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

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 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:TonyHD. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 15:54, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

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You claim that you have no personal connection or conflict of interest, but you claim authorship of his FaceBook photograph, and know what he's thinking eg ''Initially, he was shy and reserved, but his passion for music led him... Dy gradually emerged from his shell... Over time, he faced the challenge of performing on stage, an endeavor that he found initially daunting. However, he overcame his fears and achieved a significant milestone''. Concealing a COI can lead to a block Please read the guidance below:


 * When you write about a person, you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.


 * Most of your text was unreferenced or referenced to clearly unsuitable sources, such as Wikipedia and Google. We need independent third-party sources
 * The idea is that references confirm what you have said, but, for example, your refs for Dy's music is characterized by enchanting melodies, introspective lyrics, and a wide range of influences that span from African literature to iconic musicians such as [2], [3] and [4]. were three Wikipedia articles. Even if Wikipedia was acceptable, none of the three articles even mention him, let alone confirm what you have written.
 * I can't see how he meets the notability criteria I've linked above, no mention of awards or chart placings


 * You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.
 * It's basically a fan page eg unique blend... He gained recognition... is characterized by enchanting melodies, introspective lyrics... musical journey continues to unfold with a series of exciting opportunities on the horizon. Notability doesn't depend on what you think of his music, we need real facts


 * There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
 * You must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed on Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.
 * Please write in proper English, why do you put iconic musicians such as [2], [3] and [4]? Don't they have names?
 * You had no wikilinks in your article.

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. If you are writing about yourself, or someone you know as a friend, colleague, client, employer or relative, you have a conflict of interest, and you must disclose the nature of that COI. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 07:33, 12 June 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi Jimfbleak I only linked his Facebook page to get his photo on Wikipedia since I don't have an original photo of him, also what I said about him being shy is from an independent source an interview he had with La Nouvelle Repulique. I believe your decision to delete my article was harsh, you could have just rejected my submission and guide me on where to improve my work. Anyway thank you for time. BloomChef (talk) 14:06, 12 June 2023 (UTC)