User talk:Blue2gold/rough draft

Ok. The draft needs significantly more citations. You might also consider exploring the economic impact of early space flights. Or the budget for early space flights. Where did the money come from? Wss there any debate over the use of tax dollars to fund these programs. It's still not clear exactly what your topic is. The draft is a start but it needs significantly more attention. Cassell04 (talk) 13:40, 10 October 2018 (UTC)

The draft is ok but you need to add more information to your topic as I am pretty confused about what it is exactly. You also should add more than one citation, about 2-4. It's a good start but there is so much more that you can add to make sure that it is a good and informative article. I would definitely talk about how exploring space impacts the economy and who benefits from it. If you do this than I believe your final product can be very good.Mcanessa1 (talk) 03:08, 20 October 2018 (UTC)