User talk:Blue maple tree/International Jewish Labor Bund/Browneye123 Peer Review

Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?

I think everything was relevant! And I like the order of the topics as well, I think they flow nicely.

Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

No, I think everything is balanced.

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

There isn't much diversity of thought shown within the article, which could be something to explore.

Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?

There are no sources, so be sure to add them!

Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?

No sources, so N/A

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?

No sources. In the beginning, the article states that the Bund was “re-established”. It might be helpful to explain why it had to be re-established. What happened before WW2? I think it could also be helpful to add who was important in the movement, and what they did - what was their impact?

Your review
Hi Browneye123 please move your review to the user page (first tab of this page) Also, please formulate your comments according to the peer review template and elaborate if you can Dolly City (talk) 04:49, 25 April 2023 (UTC)